Revision

After speaking with Patrick, we've agreed that the process needs to evolve from simply an interpretation or re-interpretation of the narrative into a type of consequential process involving a lot of re-editing. The narrative will remain as my starting point and the notion of the gay bathhouse will be the initial programme. But inevitably the building will have to take on a life of its own, by reaching out to the city and weaving it together with the idea of the bath. This will happen through the gradual layering of both the existing narrative with my own interjections regarding the site and the city. The idea is to force myself to have to negotiate between the gay bathhouse and other contextual issues (for example a public bath).